飞龙在天123 发表于 2024-6-12 07:15   全显示 1楼
比较俗套的ntl文开局，不过作者文笔还可以。开篇倒序，描写了女主的前后反差，突出了背德感和色气感。就是女主认命和堕落的有点快，如果再加点挣扎和心理描写，能让女主人前仙子的形象立得更住，后面再展开写女主堕落后的y乱和下j，感觉色气度就要爆了。后面的章节还没看，但是很期待女主后续表现。总体是篇不错的文章，我的兄弟挺有感觉的（笑死）


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