laoge9 发表于 2012-8-25 02:05   全显示 1楼
写的很好，当属一篇色情推理小说，故事情节环环相扣，而且又十分紧张惊险，时而教人胆战心跳、时而令人舒气心宽，故事情节有十分贴近现实，叙述的十分合理，让人感觉倒是一个真实的事件，概括地讲是一篇十分值得细看的好文章。但美中不足的还是别字较多，甚至将女警郭宁误写成“郭斌”。希望改正。谢谢！
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