windshear 发表于 2009-6-1 17:46   全显示 1楼
一如既往的精彩，所以淫民们的等待是值得的，坚决要求保证质量。谢谢LZ的好创作，细节、心理和剧情都挺耐人寻味的，看了好几遍，真过瘾。
中间有点小虫子：
脸上一（付）欲仙欲死的样子——一（副）
总能恰到好处的（妆）扮自已——（装）扮
像琳琳这样的媳妇（那）里去找——（哪）里
常常害（燥）的起身把我推到一边——害（臊）

感谢LZ大大的奉献，会继续支持你的，加油!
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