inhaose 发表于 2013-8-31 23:13   全显示 1楼
很高兴看到这样一篇精彩的文章，不仅仅的为了描写性爱场面，还细致的描写了人物的心理发展历程，情感发展入情入理，情节进展的自然合理，男主人公作为初哥在见到熟妇女主人公时的表现合情合理，描写的细致入微，很生动的刻画了一个情欲勃发但又害羞顾虑懵懂的小伙子形象，不过感觉接下来女主人公可能别描写成一个荡妇，期待下文，楼主辛苦了
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